Episode Six Assignments

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Most Undecided: Naomi

Second Most Undecided: Candy

Third Most Undecided: Cain

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Critique: NAOMI

Naomi is a good player, and a smart person. She's easy to talk to on a one to one basis, and is probably one of the people I am closest to in this game. However, her temper (for lack of a better word) sometimes gets her into trouble, though I can see how she would get upset because of the way some people have been attacking her nonstop. I'm not saying that she doesn't have the right to defend herself against spy accusations, but the personal rebuttals on people's character and stuff doesn't really help anything. If she's a citizen, she needs to talk to the people against her one on one to help them understand why she is not a threat and needs to stay around. If she's a spy, she needs to start thinking about how to get rid of the key people against her.

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Critique: MASAKI

Wow. What can I say about Masaki? His quietness makes him a target, I believe. I don't know how many times I've tried talking to him and gotten little or no response. His character seems forced and he tries to shrug up really talking to people, at least in any serious manner. This worries me about him. He needs to start acting in a more believable, helpful, and pleasant manner if he's a citizen who wants to stick around.

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Critique: ADELAIDE

Okay, girl, there's being involved and then there's overkill. Nobody cares about what you have to say after you start 3000 new topics in a day. Just because you state opinions on who you think are spies and crazy ideas about conspiracies or whatnot, doesn't mean that everyone is going to view you as a spy. If you are, actually, a citizen, which I doubt, tone it down a little. Well, more than a little, actually. Can't you tell that you're getting on people's nerves? Even if you are a spy, STILL tone it back just to give people a little bit of peace. It'd be better on everyone's sanity if you did.

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Critique: FAIZAH

She's such a strong character player, and was so close to Beverly, that one can't help but be wary of her. Yes, it's great that you have such a good grasp on your character's personality, but don't think you can just play dumb diva anymore and get away with it, especially since your closest ally turned out to be a spy. Maybe she duped you, I don't know, but I would tread very carefully from now on if I were you. I think you contribute well to the discussions in the Burg, which is a good thing, and I hope you continue to do so in the future.

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Critique: DAMON

If you haven't figured it out yet, nobody cares what you have to say, Damon. Many people think you're a spy, and lots of people believe you to be boring, also. As was stated in your very own "I'm not going to be here...EVER" thread, WE DON'T CARE. If you're here or not, you never contribute anything helpful to the citizens, and it's starting to wear down people's patiences. I don't think I've ever seen you on AIM, so you might want to try logging on every now and then to get to know the other people in the Burg. It could help your position greatly, I believe. That's how I think you could improve upon your strategy.

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Critique: ABRAMS

I've got two words for him to improve his strategy: BE NICE. It never hurt anyone to at least be pleasant to talk to. He comes off as offended that you even say hi to him, and conversations never really go anywhere. This makes him very closed off and very unhelpful. It is also suspicious when someone doesn't even make the effort to be cordial to someone they're talking to. You don't have to be a social butterfly, Abrams, but it would be nice to actually talk to you so that I could figure out your identity. If you're a spy, by all means, keep doing what you're doing because it will eventually get you out of the game, and make way for us citizens to win the gold at the end of the rainbow.

[Judge Sam]

Thank you for posting your critiques, I really enjoyed them.